What is your opinion?
Need tissues! So good.
"This is brilliant and the fact that it is based on real life situations breaks my heart. If you ever want to talk, I'm here. I suppose writing really is the best medicine to these situations. I understand you and believe me, I know how you. Your writing is magical and bittersweet - amazing style. Please write more. If anyone deserves the recognition, it's you."
I loved it! A few suggestions...
"Your writing left me spellbound. I loved how real you kept it, and I was following you with every sentence. 2 suggestions: 1. There are some spelling issues - where are there not - but capitalizing is key to keeping a good poem. Make sure that all your lines are capitalized with good spelling and no strange gaps? 2. There are parts of the poem that were more in paragraphs rather than lines. In any poem/story, line spacing is important. It can define a moment of truth, a powerful spot in time. A spot in memory, ^ See what I did there??? Haha well, I'm not as good a writer as you - but try to keep your lines short, and if not, split your paragraphs into more lines. Was this really based on your life? That shattered me. Your poem was truly beautiful. Keep on writing, you have a talent for it!"
