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Summary

A 13 year old tomboy who loves music,sports, books, and comics. She doesn’t like people and’s a rebel plus an outsider. She knows retikwondo and’s the strongest in her school. Don’t test her even if you think you’re stronger than her. She pays attention in class and gets straight A’s, not to mention she knows Japanese. When Ray meets the new girl will she finally make a friend? Or will she push Violet out of her life to, just like she did to everyone else?

Genre
Fantasy/Other
Author
Ash
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Soccer

“ Ray get over here.” Yells couch from the bench. “ I’m coming coach!” I yell back. Yeah. Coach is so bossy. Alright last part of the game. Says coach “ and Ray, try not to bench another player”. Fine I say as I go on to the field. As we play soccer I notice that a player is about to attack and defend me on the field so as soon as he tries I amedietly dodge and go help my team win leaving him in the dust. We won the game and then we went and got ice cream to celebrate. Then I head home and start thinking about soccer. Soccers great but basketballs better. Then I’m home. All I can think of is the soccer match I just had and that now my team is in the finals. We haven’t lost a game at all this season so I can’t wait and then I Remember that the soccer finals are in New Jersey and that I need parent permission to go. I imedietly ask if I can go and they say yes, and then all I dream about is soccer. And then I wake up.

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