What is your opinion?
His confession
"This book is awesome. I like it . I would recommend it to me friends . I love the author's writing style "
The notorious killer
"Nice story..nice turn of eventd"
Miller boys
"Actually this is my third time to reread and I wanna recommend it to the teens like me and my friends..Symone keep going for the work in progress"
Avid reader
"Great storyline. Keeps you interested. "
Improve your spell mistake ✨
"Fantastic 😍✨"
Good book
"Very good book so far i like it "
Good
"Interesting drama story 😊👍"
Black rose or back for good!
"Let's see what's next...! Congratulations for your writing style! There's something that I dislike about the errors! ¡ in some words but it sounds great 😉. I think that I would recommend this book to anyone who likes to read a novel with some background history of cross roads in life!"
Love the storyline
"While its easy to follow the storyline its frustrating to read this story at first it felt rushed like so much was left out i guess its because i love where the story is going but there is so much cringe worth moments."
His confession
"Its ok so far"
His confession
"It’s good just a couple off grammar mistakes and words in the wrong order. Also it started off with the pov of the people now it’s the pov of the Arthur which is confusing. Please update faster😭😭 Its a really good book. I cannot wait to read the next chapter even tho you posted one an hour ago! "
Keep writing!
"Interesting characters and a plot with many threads. I like your style and you keep your readers hooked from the first word."
Pretty Good Story
"Pretty good story, just the story line jumped so quickly that I feel like there was some stuff left out leading up to the John character, finding the mom, and the dad and Liam finding their daughter/sister. Curious to see how it ends. "
Good start!
"Since it's your first time writing, I would say it's a good start. The plot seemed quite interesting, but need to get polished. I love this type of stories so it was a good read for me. To improve, you need to read other's story and learn how they write and progress a plot. Some of the mistakes could be fixed with a quick proofread. But, I will say, you did a great job as a novice writer. Good luck with your writing journey, it's just the start, so don't worry. Keep writing, dear:)"
