Prologue
"Everyone is necessarily the hero of his own life story."


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Ivelle Preston had a perfectly normal life. She grew up in a small english town, and she always wished she had a more adventurous life. Her wish came true when she moved to London. Her life changed in a few month. Someone killed her mother, but the police says it was just a robbery. In her last letter her mother asked her to find one of her old friends Margareth Lloyd. After the letter Ivelle finds herself in a whole new world, surrounded by magical creatures, and in the middle of an upcoming war. Will she be able to save, the world she barely know, or will the evil win? ~ "You are possibly the worst apprentice I've ever trained." laughed the man. "Thank you, for the encouragement. " she rolled her eyes and lifted her sword. "Let's get back to work." "That's the spirit!" the man drew out his sword "Ready?" "Ready like hell."
"Everyone is necessarily the hero of his own life story."
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So the story seems like it has a decent premise. The only mistakes I see here are little grammar errors, and you switched tenses once.
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