What is your opinion?
Interesting
"Bloody just how I like it. The narrative style felt like a nicely written prose and kept me hooked. Overall a very good job. "
Speechless
"One thing for sure: this is something that's worthy of the appreciation internationally. The way the writer created a system for magic, called thinkers, is something that I really find creative and very original. It makes me wanna be a thinker too! I hope that a lot of thinkers will be introduced for the second part of this, if there's any. The grammar is also flawless and the way the writer combined words is easy to follow. There are words that are not in English, but it actually adds up to its originality. Great work!"
Very intriguing!
"It's a great read! The concept is wonderful and it's very unique. I really like the concept of it, I feel it is very original and addictive. The plot moves a little slowly and it takes a few chapters to get into the book, but once your in, the plot starts to move much quicker. The author does a wonderful job making things realistic and intense. It is well written and well thought out!"
Great Story and Narrative Writing!
"I really enjoyed reading this book. The characters are really well written as well as the plot. Well, this book itself is well-written! The writing style is really unique and easy to understand and each chapters leaves you hanging, must be the writer's technique to make you turn the page. Anyway, the story itself is really not cliche and it's very interesting with unexpected twists. The foreshadowing also is masterfully crafted in the writing. I hope a lot of people will find this as this is worth reading for! I can't wait for the next chapters to be published!"
Stranded in thoughts
"The writing got confusing a lot of times. The pace was too slow for me, and there was no immediate connection between your opening chapter and the rest of the story. I also think you should provide a list of the foreign words you use and their meaning in English at the end of each chapter. I had to google some, like "Sinturon Ni Hudas." Keep up the hard work!"
Dont know
"The writing is choppy. Sometimes it is hard to follow. Storyline is not to bad."
