What is your opinion?
The prince
"I like the plot and characters. The setting also great as rather than stop and describe you let the characters interact and state it. I recommend this to teenagers in their 20s and 30. "
Intriguing
"This book was definitely one that keeps you asking for more. The writing is on point to keep you interested in 'what's next'"
Short but exciting
"The Prince was an exciting read. I enjoyed the spoiled bratty protagonist and his drastic change through out the story. The world building was well though out and clear. The author did a great job painting a picture for the reader without having a map. I liked the connection to real life leaders. I thought that was cleverly done. The battle scenes were a bit drawn out but very detailed. I suggest cutting the battle short or creating more personal conflict inside the war with the protagonist. Overall I enjoyed reading this story and I definitely want to find out want happens in the second part! "
Engaging
"The story was gripping. The story flowed from one sentence to another that I did not even realize how much and how long I had been reading. There were run-on sentences in which the author used commas instead of semi-colons, but the meaning of the sentence was not lost. All in all, I enjoyed this story. It's a shame that it only had 13 chapters. If "The Prince" ever gets a continuation and gets published, I would definitely buy a copy. Kudos!"
Battle Fic
"Though only 13 chapters, this story had it all: a spoiled prince who has to face a hard future and grow into a hero, a wise councilor who won't give up on him, a fierce warlord to train him and lead his army, a mysterious lady spy, and a younger rival who is yards ahead of where the main character needs to be. All these elements were skillfully woven into a story that kept my interest to the last word. As a personal aside, I could have used a little less of the battle scenes, but they were well written and showed the overwhelming odds and otherworldly character of the foe the prince is facing. I hope the writer will continue this story as it has great possibilities."
