What is your opinion?
A fun read
"This was a fun and interesting read. I like the link you've got between the powers and dates of birth (yet another reason to make sure people don't find out your identity and/or date of birth I guess). I got a good laugh from the kids running around in their suits which were pretty much pyjamas. I suppose not a lot of heroes have both superpowers and sewing skills... I also like how this is sort of somewhere between actually going out and using your superpowers and being kids going out at night and doing stupid things. The POV from the villainess should also prove to be interesting. Does she do a lot of 'villainous' things, or just go around breaking windows and rocking peoples' roofs? And she obviously cares about her sister. So she doesn't seem all that bad, which will prove interesting once her little sister and the other heroes start chasing her down. How much is her reputation really worth to her? I'll keep reading to see how this all turns out!"
Good Start
"This is an interesting take on the superhero genre. I don't think I've ever seen a story from a villianess' point of view before and it must be interesting having another family member on the opposite side. I like the idea of people's astrological sign being an indication of their powers, that's a good idea. I'm interested to see where you take the rest of this story. Keep me updated on your progress. Good job!"
