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Awesome mystery book

"This book is awesomely interesting. It kept my mind in suspence during the whole time I was reading it. The story plot and writing style is fabulous. I recommend it to all mystery lovers. I hope to read more of your mysteries, as I'm a mystery lover. "

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Unexpected Complications

"Yes, right through the unexpected happens, keeping the suspense alive. Excellent story, well written. Only hick-up I came across is that one has to sometimes wonder who is saying what since one only gets the answer somewhere later into the parragraph. One thing I have to compliment you on again, is the detail you bring into the story, making it so much easier to put a picture in one's mind. Thourough editting will have to be the order of the day because right through are either words missing, or a letter within a word is missing. Well done. An excellent example of a mystery story without the need of over the top magic."

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Unexpected Complications

"Such an amazing captivating rollercoaster with the drama, expense, and the characters. How much can one take or do before all falls into place. Hope to see this book as a movie or series one day"

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Great read

"This is one of those stories that you want to read in one setting ,,, I really enjoyed it.. Thank You for sharing , and look forward to more of your stories .. :)"

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Unexpected and Action Packed

"The beginning of this novel is so steady, quite like real life. It was a unique take on a mystery novel since many jump straight in almost immediately. It helped their relationship develop before your eyes, feeling like this took place in real life rather than fiction. It felt so raw, but once the mystery began to unravel, there was no turning back. Non stop action and adventure so enticing you can't put the novel down even for a second whether it be to get food or walk an adorable puppy. Your easy to follow narrative style helped every unravel and be so concise even when the mystery began to foil out. Guessing the twists and turns only added to the feel of it all. Your suspense all too encaptivating. Awesome job!"

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Unexpected indeed!

"I love the way this story unravels from the most mundane, to an absolute adventure. The layers of intrigue and danger slowly come forth, and sometimes the unexpected slap you in the face. I enjoyed reading the main couple's backstory, and particularly how they met. It gives you a glint on how their relationship evolved and helps you feel connected to them. This is probably just a personal preference, but I felt the intimate scenes were too graphic. Not something I would look for in this kind of story. Beyond that, I loved their chemistry and the way they faced the trials on their path. A truly exciting story!"

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Great!

"What a great read! I love the chemistry between the characters and their interactions. They feel realistic and authentic, and it really immerses me in the story! They make the story fun and unique, and the plot is great too! The writing style is nice and easy to follow, and there’s plenty of comedy to be found, which makes the story quite enjoyable to read through. Overall great work! :) "

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Sitting on the edge of my seat

"From the beginning, the author paints a picture with prose that ensnares all of our senses. Stitiching together the layers of the protagonist's necessity to move, an unknown box, and the lives of her family the author creates a world that the reader is easily swept up into. We are all placed on a rollercoaster ride, inching up a steep incline, gaining information and developing all the characters while still yearning for the answers to the most prominent question, "what's in the box." Boy, let me tell you, once you get the answer, hang on tight. You will find yourself falling over the precipice with the actions that follow. I found myself chomping at the bit with the end of each chapter and could not press "Next Chapter" fast enough. The author's writing style flows effortlessly from paragraph to paragraph. A few grammatical errors can be found here and there, but nothing drastic. I cannot wait to see how this finally unfolds. Keep up the excellent work. :)"

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Great intrigue!

"My review is for chapter 1 through 14 ... I love the writer's style, I related to the characters because they have strong back stories and feel very real. The intrigue is heavy about the box, I love that the writer takes her time to reveal what's inside, it makes you read the next chapters until you get to the reveal and then continue to the next chapters to find out what happens about it! Love it and can't wait to continue it :) Thanks for sharing your stories with us!"

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A Must Read!

"I can’t wait to re-read this here! I love it, my favourite part is how they met❤️❤️❤️, such beautiful writing Karin. "

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Unintended Complications

"Love the premise of the story. I can't wait for updates."

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Unintended complications

"Love it , waiting for more update "

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Unintended Complications

"Too bad this isn't further along. I'll be stalking the author watching for updates. I love the mystery and the idea that this box is able to complicate everything in Lizzy's life. You've got my attention. Please don't forget to update. Finally got back to Inkitt to read the rest of this story. Wow! Nonstop action from the moment the box is opened until the contents return to where they belong. Romance side plots and many twists and turns leave us breathless until the end. Thanks for the great read."

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Unintended complications

"These 3 chapters already sounds like a good book. "

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Unexpected complications

"Story was good but narrative could be better. Sometimes it appeared being dragged in some scenes. Overall a good book. Best of luck to the author."

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How I reunite with my father

"It's an amazing book, keeping me on my toes, it was a well structure novel, I placed my self in this novel"

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Unexpected Complications

"I really enjoyed the mystery behind it all and finding out some of the surprises..I don’t want to give anything away. Great read with romance, adventure, action and more! "

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Good

"If you are looking for a laid back slow paced book with great chemistry between characters, this is the story for you! The few typos and mistakes didn't steal much of the overall enjoyment of the story, but honestly changing POVs did. An adventure book is supposed to be plot driven, but this book focuses on characters, giving you insights of their backstory which is not always necessary to the plot. Is it a good thing or a bad thing? It's for you to decide when you read the book. "

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