The Dark Woods Circus

Shelley Miller

1 chapters read

Jun 26, 2016

It's fun! It's fun!

"The moment I saw the title of this I thought to myself, "Oh please be a reference to the vocaloid song!" and it was! You really managed to capture the narrative of the story while putting it together in short story form without making it feel song-fic-y. The descriptions of the characters in the song are spot on, everything looks like it should. If you've got any more of these, count me in! Great work, Winter!"

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TheGalacattopian

1 chapters read

Feb 28, 2016

Loved It

"I love this song. (I am a big vocaloid fan myself) Your writing was really fun to read and I think you did very well in transcribing the song into a coherent story. Well done. I loved your take on it."

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Art,🎼

1 chapters read

Jun 7, 2019

It Didn't Make Sense But Still Good

"It was good but didn't make sense •Confusing •To Short •Plot was good"

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Puddin Tane

1 chapters read

Oct 11, 2019

One Shot

"One Shot was written under the Horror genre. It did not deliver. I was left wondering when something would happen. By story's end I was still wondering."

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