What is your opinion?
Interesting
"The book has a interesting concept something that was unexplored till now. You have a charm for story telling. The sarcasm is refreshing!! I really loved your book. Would try to read your other books too!!"
A stunning Read
"A story with deep meanings that have not yet been fully revealed. This author is a brilliant storyteller , creative, interesting characters and witty dialogue fill these tales written "
Great
"I like that the story makes a reader anticipating to know what happens next, it also has a brilliant plot, needs some editing but apart from that it's an awesome book to read"
An eerie delight
"I really love the plot and the concept. It's something fresh and new. Like unexplored stuff. And with the way its written, it really seems as if I have entered a new world and a strange being is telling me about herself. And did I mention that I also am intrigued by the book cover? The only few things I found off were, that it had some mistakes. Just a few in each chapter. Not that it disturbs the reading experience, but it is noticeable. Also at times I just felt confused. Certain transitions were odd or out of place. So if you can re-arrange the sentences or maybe change them in a way that it is not too twisted, then it might become easier to understand. But what I really love about this book is its dark humor. The protagonist just remarks at things which we humans wouldn't speak of much often, and she does it in such a way that it leaves you thinking. And the messages hidden behind those words make a lot of sense. So I think that author has done a great job of not only story telling, but also making the reader realize things that are wrong or is thought of as wrong (hence giving a message to improve the human kind) and leaves them wondering."
Editing needed
"Starting from what I liked in this story - 1) The sarcastic and humorous tone of the narrator, this keeps the readers entertained, motivating them to keep reading. 2) The smooth flow of dialogs, even though there were not many of them, but still those few were brilliant. You have the ability to imagine a conversation in your head perfectly, no more or no less than needed. 3) The thoughts and feelings of the protagonist - you are a pro at this, you write them like you were actually present in that situation, You can create a picture in our head without us noticing. I applaud the author for achieving this. What you can improve- 1) Edit extra thoughts, what I mean is - when we write, a thousand of thoughts passes through our head and we just throw them onto the paper. But, when we edit, we do it mercilessly. Any extra info or lines, that have nothing to do with the plot, should be cropped. Or else, the writing turns boring. 2) The plot seemed distorted, like there are questions still unanswered, so more chapters are required to answer them. Overall, I loved this, your writing style never seems to disappoint me. No one can write like this - dark yet humorous. So keep writing, my dear! Hope to read more from you"
