What is your opinion?
Good so far.....
"The plot is excellent as far. I got my interest and hell got me hooked up!!!. lol.. I like the idea of two different races at war. A great science fiction, we all love. I do hope you succeed in publishing and getting lots love from your readers one day. I can't wait to see a great published banner on the your wall. I live to see that day.., Putting aside some grammatical errors, you are doing great. ......"
Loved it
"Wow! I am new to Scifi and truly your book has captured my attention. I loved the flow of the book. The names of the characters and how humans are evil. I totally loved it! "
The Upside
"I really like this! It tells a story of how the Kaylee people and the humans were in a war and the products of afterwards. I know they aren't real (The Kaylee people), but Rayne and Bow are interesting together! Rayne's siblings, Moon, Sky, Sunrise and Sunset, tell a story too. I think Rayne's telekenisis is cool, Sky's super-hearing (whatever it was called), and Moon's See-In-The-Dark eyes. Sunrise and Sunset are who's powers I'm waiting for. Rayne almost getting raped was scary. The doctor and the tormenter are gon get it next chapter I bet! This story has great potential, and I can tell this book will be a best seller! Keep writing, and never stop! //_OriginalSwiftie13_\\"
An enjoyable read!
"I liked the story and the plot. I definitely saw some parallels with The 100 tv series (If you haven't watched it, I strongly recommend you do). I like the idea of having two different races at war with each other, but I feel like this is more of a sci-fi book rather than fantasy, but no matter what genre it falls under, it's an enjoyable story! I look forward to reading future chapters, keep up the good work!"
Extremely Well Written
"The story is really good it is a real page turner it definitely has potential to become a best seller once it is finished i look forward to seeing how the author continues the story i will be waiting eagerly for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work. i can picture each chapter in my head as if i were there watching it happen so really good job with the detail you put into it"
I love it!!!
"It's some of the best work I've witnessed. I love the plot of your story and the way you keep the readers attention at the end of your chapters. You have great potential and I am waiting for the next chapters to come. I love your work!!!"
Great!
"I love the story jamie keep up the work "
Review
"I like that that you describe the surroundings very well. It paints a picture in my mind. What I noticed was that you skip directly to the action which is great but I feel like you should add more mini events that lead to the big event. Otherwise, its like youre listing a bunch of things that happened but have no relation. Establish connections and relations. You did really well with choosing a plotline. I cant wait to read more!!!"
