MIAK

Bird's nest

This story begins when Allen was a teenager ,her parent passed away. Therefore she was left under the care of her aunt and uncle. But soon they died in a car accident.Later, mystery encloses .
The story is basically based upon bad deeds of blind lovers. At this point the plot seems unreal. But beyond this the whole story is fascinating.

Fascinating

Nice plotting ! I believe that you had have imagined all the story in your mind first .Not like others just want to prolonged it . Your writing skills are amazing. The thing that attracts my intentions towards your story is your scene description.Carry on just like this.

Illusion

I honestly had read only first 5 chapters of your novel. I am sincerely curious for its ongoing story . Its been almost an month I have been waiting for your next update.

Good so far.....

The plot is excellent as far. I got my interest and hell got me hooked up!!!. lol..
I like the idea of two different races at war. A great science fiction, we all love. I do hope you succeed in publishing and getting lots love from your readers one day.
I can't wait to see a great published banner on the your wall. I live to see that day..,
Putting aside some grammatical errors, you are doing great. ......

SPLENDID!

your poetry writing style resembles very much with my sister Nazra noor. I just don't have enough words to praise it your poetry makes me feel the sense of loneliness that i had experinced in real life.

SPLENDID!

i love your story plotting.AMAZING! like it just makes you want to read the second one that much faster!!!! i wanna really thank the author for taking the time to write such an amazing book and i cant wait to read more of your books in the future thank you! i love you ! and i hope you have amazing day because you truly deserve it girl.

Te cafe

SPLENDID!nice plotting . loved it. Next time try to create more distinction between characters. Other then that your story is awsome👍.Take care!

What if everything you said mattered

Splendid!you really nailed in you first attempt. Usually it took time in perfection . I love how you have the confidence and passion-ed to talk about your life and not be ashamed to solve problems out there spreading awareness on what people like you and just everyone else go’s through its awesome!
Any good luck on your next story. I hope you will improve further.

brothers love

The story would been more interesting if naturalization and realistically of scene had been descrides in a little more detail.There isn't much I can say since this is a story told by another, not from the author's own mind. It could have done with less capitalizing of the people and things had by the children, and explanations to flesh out the story for people unfamiliar with the words would be helpful. Any way you tried your best. Congratulations !