Chapter 1
Fasting on a sunny day.


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This poem reflects the scene of a hot sunny day in equatorial countries .No doubt that sunny day is very valuable to Europeans .But having an experience in a practical life on a beach of Arabian sea in summer. I thought to share my feelings with you guys .
Fasting on a sunny day.

Rosalind French: This story has so much potential to be better. I sense the author has not taken the time to proof read. At times it was confusing to read -so many typos, grammar errors etc. There was also one chapter that was extremely short. Besides all this, I enjoyed the love story. A tear or two may have been s...
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Onwura Ekene: It was a good plot twist - it made me realize that friends are not friends,they are also angels,the right ones tho- From chapter one to the end was really good
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Sarah: Hey! I really enjoyed your story. It made me wonder how you actually write. Are you someone who plans everything in advance, or do you discover the story as the chapters unfold?
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Karen: I really liked the story but I am going to be honest i was really disappointed in the ending. They still had issues that needed to worked out. Several things were just left where they were and not wrapped up. I hope this means there will be another part later.
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Harriett Williams: Interesting plot, and amazing how many bad guys are always dishing out the punishment to the heroine. I am waiting for the happy ending I thought was coming, but it seems to be getting further away.
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legsnroads: Lexa may be young, but she’s been through some heartbreak. Then we meet Nick, one of her students uncle. Respect grows into more, and we end up with a big happy family.Not only making you love their relationship, you bond with the whole family. Add in laughs, cheering on Nick when he says what needs...
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Maria Elena: Writen with humor and a nice story to move the characters along. If the author ever turned it into a longer story, there is material for a novel. Regardless, a well written, interesting story.
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