Chapter 1
Fasting on a sunny day.
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This poem reflects the scene of a hot sunny day in equatorial countries .No doubt that sunny day is very valuable to Europeans .But having an experience in a practical life on a beach of Arabian sea in summer. I thought to share my feelings with you guys .
Fasting on a sunny day.
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Rosalind French: This story has so much potential to be better. I sense the author has not taken the time to proof read. At times it was confusing to read -so many typos, grammar errors etc. There was also one chapter that was extremely short. Besides all this, I enjoyed the love story. A tear or two may have been s...
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Muller666: I loved it! The rythm is great, the characters quite realistic and touching! I was hyped by their relationship and will definitely read the next books!
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Miriam0011: Hi, I just wanted to reach out and say how much I love your writing style. Your work always feels so engaging and well-researched. I was actually curious how do you usually approach your research phase before you start drafting? Looking forward to hearing from you!
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Miriam0011: It was a pleasure reading and analyzing your writing you’re doing fantastic work. It’s always motivating to see such creativity. Are you working on a story these days?
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Miriam0011: Hi there! I really enjoyed reading your story, it was both interesting and well written. Your style feels very natural and easy to connect with. Do you usually write in this genre, or do you explore others as well?
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Onwura Ekene: It was a good plot twist - it made me realize that friends are not friends,they are also angels,the right ones tho- From chapter one to the end was really good
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Historical Author: Every obstacle in this story feels real and specific rather than manufactured for drama. The conflict comes from character and circumstance and that makes all the difference."
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CrimsonMabel: I really enjoyed your story! Sydney’s personality, the Vegas setting, and the chemistry between the characters feel very cinematic. I think this would look amazing as a comic/webtoon with proper character designs and illustrations. I actually got some ideas on how your story could be visually adapte...
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emmylee.p.: Funny, cute, heartwarming, good writing, great characters, and a bit of spice
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I love your style. :)
Thank! I will update a new poem soon