Chapter 1
Fasting on a sunny day.
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This poem reflects the scene of a hot sunny day in equatorial countries .No doubt that sunny day is very valuable to Europeans .But having an experience in a practical life on a beach of Arabian sea in summer. I thought to share my feelings with you guys .
Fasting on a sunny day.
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Good Writing
Compelling Plot
Great Character
Strong Dialog

Nat: J'ai beaucoup aimé lire cette histoire... Une belle plume facile à lire drôle, émouvante et sensuelle... J'aimerais bien avoir une suite avec les autres personnages qui n'ont pas été trop impliqués dans l'histoire, ce serait sympa comme suite ♥️
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grytbit: I just love the back and forth between Magnus and Lola, so much fun!
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Linda Searle: This is not your typical I hate you I love you scenario. This is something almost real. Ellie as a character is refreshing and had me both laughing and crying often. I would recommend this to anyone looking for something different.
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MaríEn: Me gusta la temática y no me gusta que la dejen a medias
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YukkeTee: This isn’t just a romance. It’s the kind of slow-burn, messy kind of love that feels real—where two people carry scars and walls, and still choose each other anyway. The tension isn’t just between them; it’s in the quiet moments, the way they fumble through vulnerability, and the small, unspoken act...
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Roshini: I like everything about this novel except for the sickness which is a heartbreak, I would definitely recommend to first time readers.
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Susanne B. Baronin von Rothensteyn: Bleib einfach Deinem Stil treu, auch bei den intimen Szenen. Du machst das toll.So lange es am Ende ein Happyend gibt, ist für mich alles gut 🫣
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karp2022: Viele Zweifel führen zu Bewegungen zwischen den Protagonisten. Mal so, mal anders, immer was los - und das mit Tiefgang.
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I love your style. :)
Thank! I will update a new poem soon