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Hot Sunny Day

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Summary

This poem reflects the scene of a hot sunny day in equatorial countries .No doubt that sunny day is very valuable to Europeans .But having an experience in a practical life on a beach of Arabian sea in summer. I thought to share my feelings with you guys .

Genre
Poetry,Humor
Author
MIAK
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

Fasting on a sunny day.


What a crazy lump of clay;

On the side of golden bay.

What a crazy sunny day.


Sun burning like a flame;

Everybody is laying lame.

Still, I have just one claim;

Why sun is all at blame?


Waves crashing at the coast;

It's all that's most;

What I haven't lost;

On the day of zero frost.


All that surrounds me is blue.

Still, I haven't a single clue;

What brings people to have this view;

In these flames in form of dew?


I am looking like a streak;

In this queer meek.

Everybody's walking like a creep;

In these golden streets.


Sunny day is like a play;

Which starts without a delay.

Shines bright, just like hay;

What a crazy sunny day.



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author

I love your style. :)

6 years
author

Thank! I will update a new poem soon

6 years

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