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Little foxes

"Nice story I enjoyed reading it. Thank you"

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Little Foxes

"The story is wonderful. I enjoyed reading every chapter. There's always so much to learn when it comes to XD stories. XD you are awesome.. looking forward to a sequel. "

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Beautiful.book can't stop reading

"Beautiful book can't stop reading i"

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Life Changes

"Sometimes we love unwisely Whenever one person carries most of the load in a relationship, the potential for abuse is high Lita was very stubborn, even with all the evidence staring her in the face, she continue to cling to a dying marriage. Umaata will always be who he is; spolied, self-indulgent, living off his looks and women until...one day he will wake up and wonder where the years have gone, what has he achieved Of course by then, it will be too late Glad Lita found someone worthy to be loved, the insight on Vincent was very poignant; his parents, siblings and wife dying in the same accident could have destroyed him. Am glad he was the one who made the first move in solidifying the relationship Good read, story line believable However Author please edit, several chapters are repeated, that spoils the reading experience "

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I have to be honest

"The plot was okay, but your writing style is not so great. Your grammar and punctuations need a lot more work. I loved the book, but was frustrated reading it. You need to do some editing and take your time writing. Don't rush it. Also as I made comments before, there are chapters that are repeating. Chapters 2 and 5 are repeated. Please go back and take them down cause it does ruin the reading experience. "

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