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Nice tone
"I thought that the latter half of your poem was the strongest part. I really enjoyed the last line too. Nice, but you could benefit from a bit of proofreading at times."
True!
"I like the way you express yourself fully regarding the harsh nature of human. The poem follows a unique sense of rhyming scheme. Apart from some grammatical and punctuation mistakes, it's quite great."
