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A thrilling experience

"So... I found out that it's a one-shots kind of thing. And this has to be the first one I've read here. But, I really enjoyed it. Each chapter has it's own uniqueness and your writing is so refined. Impeccable writing! The only thing I would have liked more is if the chapters were a bit longer as I found myself wanting to read more each story; the background, the aftermath and everything. But still, that might be what makes this book more interesting. Anyhow, I loved it!"

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Definitely some potential!

"I really enjoyed the establishment of each character and the insight into their backstories, making for an anthology series totally worth a look! The biggest thing I would suggest is for you to put this to an edit; I noticed a lot of grammatical and punctuation mistakes, like missing quotes, periods, etc. While it may take away from the reader experience, the story would benefit from rectifying these. Try prowritingaid.com for help! Aside from that, keep up the good work and happy writing!"

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