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Greeting And Appreciation Request!!

"Hi, I’m Aliana a professional comic, webtoon, and manga artist with a passion for cinematic storytelling. I read your story on Inkitt and was completely hooked by the emotion, depth, and unique world you created. I specialize in expressive, high quality art that brings characters and worlds vividly to life. Let’s turn your story into a stunning visual experience connect with me on Discord: Aliana_Jordan"

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The wing elite

"I like the way it started so far its good I can't wait to read the rest of the book I've got no complaints it's been great"

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Elite Beginning

"Was gripping after the first couple of chapters and kept the reader wanting more. Has a few grammatical mistakes. "

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Hopeful

"When I get to this part seems store ends,which is disappointed.hope writer has continued story line"

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Awesome

"I loved everything about this book it was amazing "

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I like it

" I like the backstory that has come out so far, the stubbornness the FMC, and where the story is headed. I would love to see a little bit more of a difference between the sentence lengths, but it’s a completed story so it seems moot to mention it now ☺️"

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Wing Elite

"Maybe you could use less difficult worden for Readers with another language"

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The Wing Elite

"This first chapter in the story of Alex Reyes was very good. The author's writing style was captivating and kept me reading line after line. The descriptions ofwhere the character was and what she was feeling as she entered the academy was very good. I felt the scene as if I were actually there. The emotions flowing forther from Alex could be felt as well. Overall, chapter one was compelling enough to continue reading and see what happens next. Good job!"

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Good!

"There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, and this book is still in the beginning chapters, but so far this book has been a great read. Congratulations to the Author."

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The Wing Elite

"This book is awesome!!!! For now the plot twist just started but I have big hopes for this book( also I wish for the readers and the writer a great holiday even with the pandemic)"

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I love it.

"I personally love the book. The only think I dislike is the fact that she brought me in the story and then just stopped. It was gooooodddd✊🏽😍"

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Alex and dragons

"Very solid writing with very few editing errors. Good character development and dialogue, with plausible plot. Engaging characters that are relatable and enjoyable. Prose is neither effusive or lacking. Very well done."

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First review

"Decent plot."

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The wing Elite

"I like the style of writing and the fact that it is not so predictable. The plot looks interesting so far I'd recommend it to anyone who has a taste for adventures"

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The wing elite

"So far the book seems ok, I am leaving this review at this time as the app will not let me proceed to the next chapter until I do"

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good

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The Elite ( ??)

"I really like the plot. I like the character development and the World building. It has a good pace and decent descriptions. There are a few misspelled words some awkward sentences and some incorrect words but otherwise this is a story I am really enjoying reading. A suggestion is that I would have enjoyed a few more minutes with Alex and the dragon before she was caught. "

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