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TALES OF THE UNCONFINED CHILDREN
"Imaginative with good,likable characters. Genuine suspense and truly original. This story had me turning the pages and the short read made it a quick read."
Great Read!
"What I loved: ~ Great characters ~ Originality ~ That it was a short and sweet read ~ The suspense Concerns: ~ Paragraph length (limit to 3-4 sentences) ~ Info-dumping (let the information seep through instead of outlining it all from the get-go)"
