Chapter 1
โCome on y/n!โ
โOk hold on!โ
Looking into your full length mirror you ruffle up your hair to give it that just fucked look, then chuckled to yourself at how messy you looked. Your black Lacey mini dress barely reached your knees giving attention to your beautiful legs. Grabbing your black pumps and purse you ran downstairs to see your friend Naomi at the door.
Phone in hand she glances up at you and smiles. โWe can fix that in the car.โ
At 23 your life had been extra ordinary. Somewhat. You were an only child, your mother was single. She worked full time all the time, overtime at a diner just to put food on the table. Sometimes shed come home smelling like cigarettes and had large bags under her eyes. Still she was beautiful. You never asked about your dad. To this day you still didnโt know entirely what happened to him. He just went poof! gone. The thought didnโt make your life more difficult. Ecspcially since people like Naomi came into your life.
" Are you even listening to me Y/n?โ Asked Naomi.
You rolled your eyes and said โWhat did kirishima do now?โ You flipped through your phone trying to find a playlist.
" Its not something he did its something heโs doing. You read that article I sent you about the bank robbery right?. โ
Who didnโt? That's all anyone's been talking about. About two days ago there was a big break in a robbery at the city bank, and the top heroes were in on it. Including the hero Deku, Todoroki, Ground zero, and Naomiโs boyfriend Kirishima. According to the news, the robbers had held Hostages for ransom for a high of $500,000. The 4 of them beat their asses to a pulp but in the mist a hostage was hurt. Kirishima being the guy he is took care of the hostage until the ambulance came. The woman was dieing. I wouldnโt be surprised if her last wish was to kiss the handsome hero. Well, she got her wish.
The picture of them kissing was literally everywhere you looked. Im surprised Naomi kept her shit together when she saw that picture. โYes, I did Naomi.โ
" Well, he still insists on visiting that woman in the hospital!โ Naomi says gripping the steering wheel. The car jerked and you were choked by the seatbelt. โJesus Christ Naomi calm down.โ
Naomi blows a Strand of her hair up from her forehead.โ Weโve been having complications lately. Sometimes I just wonder if im enough.โ
You beamed at Naomi. It pissed you off to see her this way. Naomi was beautiful in mind and body. In high school all the guys adored her. Kirishima must have his head in his ass if he didnโt see her glow. โ Your more than enough for him, heโs not THAT dumb he knows what heโs got and heโs not gonna let it go.โ
" Thank you Y/n you're the best friend a girl can ask for.โ Naomi says smiling.
You ran a hand through your thick hair. โ Yeah whatever. Your the one whoโs dragging me out to this club so I can get some di-โ
โLook y/n weโre here!โ
The neon pink sign that read Euphoria was hanging up on the outside wall of the brick building. You and Naomi walked to the back of the line forming out of the front doors. As the line moved fast you could hear the booming music that was coming from inside the club. Your stomach churned with excitement. The line eventually moved faster and soon enough you were in the club. Naomi took your hand and led you to the back of the club. Passing girls straddled on top of guys and girls dancing half-naked.
Naomi had pulled you into a vip booth at the back of the club.
โNaomi?โ you said raising an eyebrow.
She just winked at you & winked. At this point it docent matter.
โIsnโt this exciting y/n?โ Naomi says as she hits you with a menu playfully.
" As exciting as it's gonna get.โ
A cute waiter walked up to your table and asked for your drinks. You noticed yourself becoming entranced with his purple hair and lazy deep eyes. His jawline was on point as was the rest of the guys in the club. His eyes met yours and you could feel your face heating up as he smiled.
" For your drank maโam?โ The waiter said chuckling.
Naomi gigged as you tried to look at something on the menu. โ Uhhhh ill take a cokeโ
He nodded, took the menus and walked away. A couple of moments of silence followed as you and Naomi gazed at each other then busted out laughing.
" You should have seen your face y/n.โ
You put your head down in embarrassments as you laughed along. โCan you blame me?โ
" I canโt leave you two together for a minute can I.โ A deep voice said.
You looked up to see Kirishima in a fashionable red button-down and jeans. You held in a scream as you saw the person next to him. It was the one and only man of your dreams. Katsuki Bakugou.









I really liked the introduction to this, it drew me in! The characters, descriptions and dialogue in this first chapter is excellent! I saw a few errors, like Dieing instead of dying, but nothing that really took away from this chapter!
The story is very good so far. I like how u introduced the scenes. For example, when there was a robbery you started introducing the characters and the drama while still talking about the robbery. You stayed on track which is really good! One thing tho about this chapter is the grammar and wording. Throughout it I couldnโt really understand what u were saying and your words were kinda mixed up. Hopefully the grammar and writing gets better ๐
The one and only..........KATSUKI BAKUGOU WITH HIS BRO