What is your opinion?
Always You
"The story of Nathan and Ruby is very sweet with heavy influence with honoring their families for better or worse. Sometimes the story switches between what's happening with Nathan and then Ruby, makes it a bit confusing to follow, just needs a bit of editing. That being said, I was still invested in the story and would like Lucy/Luca and Declan/Effie story."
Always You
"That was a beautiful story and I enjoyed it very much you had one mistake but I wouldn't put that against you you wrote it beautifully much better than some of the others that I've read I give you 100% on everything write some more good stories please"
Always you
"This story made me cry but in the end I cried happy tears. Congrats on finishing your story hope to read many more ."
Always you
"Loved Nathan and Ruby. I didn't like John though. But liked story."
Always You
"Ugh, I love this story so far. I haven't got far, but I can definitely see myself reading on and finishing the book. The way you write is so melodic and poetic, with such gentle, amazing descriptions that paint a picture rather than just a scene. I can definitely see this being a tear jerker. There were some grammatical errors and other technical errors but a proofread would fix it, no biggie. You've got a great story here and I cant wait to read on! Keep writing!"
Always you!
"This story is poignant and will draw a tear or two from its readers. I have cried, laughed and gripped the edge of my seat multiple times through the plot. And of course, the characters’ deep, timeless connection shows you what inseparable means. Keep it up, Rachel, it was great ! I’ll read the second book with a pinch in my heart. Is it going to be the same roller coaster ride? Because I still haven’t recovered from this one. Bravo! 🎉 "
Love this book!
"I really enjoyed this book. I read it a few months back and want to reread it over the Christmas holidays. I loved the connections between the characters. The dialogue was very believable. The story flow was very strong. Overall, an enjoyable read. I would highly recommend. "
Always you
"Really enjoyable story about young love, friendship and family. I recommend it! "
CUTE!!
"The main couple are very close, they quickly delve into an adorable relationship and they're just..goals! It's interesting to see different family dynamics and attitudes between the two and their different ways of life. I think that the author was successful in showing a lot of love and growth with the two characters. I'd say though, there are a few misspellings and the tenses go back and forth a lot, it disrupts the flow of the story a bit, so that's what you should mainly focus on to make it a better experience for your readers!! Good luck, I'm enjoying it so far!"
Couldn't Get Drawn In
"The author's passion was evident immediately and I wanted very much to like the story, but I found some serious grammatical issues that kept kicking me out... Nothing some practice can't improve--please keep writing!"
