What is your opinion?
It's truly nice but we need continuation of this story and not to stop at prolong
"It's nice pls continue the Story"
Great Start
"Kind of interested in where this might lead as I don't typically see stories that start off with this theme. Well done."
Something refreshing.
"While the summary may have thrown me off a tad bit the chapter itself gave me clarification. Usually a summary is short and simple but you've manage to twist that into a way of opening your story. It's unique to address one's culture into a story and you did it perfectly even addressing the terms so the reader wouldn't be lost. I must say you have a way with writing and I'm looking for more."
Good beginning
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a good start
"After reading the first part,I am curious to read the next parts...I was looking for a book that is full of love...I think its perfect for me..continue writing..i am waiting for the next...its also a muslim story...i am glad that I have got a chanc to read the story..."
Slow burn
"Firstly, the small kissing scene they shared as you have written in the description area really got me bad.I loved it!!!🔥 Secondly, I love the fact you have decided to portray the Muslim culture. Finally, starting with a wedding scene definitely wants me to dig into the beginning of the whole incident.The prologue was good too. I am eagerly waiting to read about their married life and how they became a part of this mess. Waiting for updates Hun😍😍😍"
Intriguing
"I loved the fact that you have centered your story around Islamic culture. It is a refreshing new change and would be useful in bringing a positive message in a world filled with Islamaphobia. I also loved that you have opened with a wedding. It leaves your readers with so many unanswered questions about their love story which I am sure would be answered in chapters to come. However, I was confused about the Islamic tradition in weddings. My ex-boyfriend was Islamic and I know that in Islamic law a women does not sign or give her own consent but her marriage certificate is signed by her dad. However, I understand that this may vary from culture to culture. Your story was amazing and the only reason I have awarded you four stars is because of a few technical errors that I noticed."
Not What I Was Expecting...
"This story definitely took me by surprise. I was expecting another run of the mill, happy couple kind of story. But you surprised me, using a twist on the norm as well as adding elements from your own culture into it, therefore giving a unique perspective we rarely see in most stories. As for some cons. Obviously, it's quite short, so I'm not expecting to know too much about the characters yet. Although I hope we'll get a better idea of who these people are in future chapters. Your writing also seems to be quite clean and no typos really stood out to me. I would, however, like to see more creative use of language. At the moment, the writing isn't very distinctive and I'd love to see you splice in some elements of your personality. But, other than that. It's a pretty good premise. I'm interested where you'll take it. Oh, another thing. I noticed your cover is slightly off. Don't worry, I had the exact same issue originally. If you upload your cover using the app it'll be fine. Doing it through the browser tends to just fuck it up for some reason. Hope this helps."
