What is your opinion?
Love it
"It's the first book I've read in a long time, i will definitely read some more. The book was great i recommend it to anyone who hasn't read it yet."
I forget the title name
"It's pretty good. I'm enjoying it. I like the cussing lol. I'd only make them talk more, but it's a good read. "
Heyyy🧍🏽♀️💕
"When I first joined inkitt I saw this and I was like these estories always end well but when I saw there were only 2 more chapters left I wanted to cry 😢 😭 I didn't want the story to end but also wanted it to end there is nothing to dislike about this AT ALL IM IN LOVE AND I HATE READING 😭💕"
In love with me.goodman
"The novel is emotional and so toughing thanks to the author"
Loved it!
"Was good to read a college time love story. Loved it overall ❤️"
OMG I LOVED IT
"There Is nothing you could do to improve this story, it's the best one I've read on this app so far!! I love it so much!!! 😍 your so talented!!"
Yes
"While I lay here waiting to hear from you, I can't help thinking about what my life has become when you became a part of it. Waiting and wanting you has been the focus of my thoughts these days, knowing that one day, all that I have envisioned of us being together, will finally happen, even if it's just for a moment. You give me reason to wake up in the morning and smile. Just smile for no particular reason except the fact that you are here. As days go by I feel myself growing closer and closer and my heart is suddenly coming out of its shy spot and wanting to feel what it feels like to be loved again. I don't ever want to lose this feeling. I don't ever want to lose you. When I hear your voice, it's like a feeling I don't want to leave; you give me comfort and joy. The sound of your voice is like my favorite love song, I can listen to it all night until it puts me to sleep. Yet, still as I continue to lay here and think about everything you are to me, Still, I just want you to know that wherever this road may take us, and how far it may be to finally get where we want to go, always know you are in my heart and in my heart is where you'll always be. Life hasn't been this grateful to me, until there was you. Thank you for being you. What I'd like to say u is that know as i have loved u ... we are in these toghter ur problems are equally mine and all my happiness is yours ..... Take this ❤🌹"
Good One
"This is getting more exciting and i love the twists it has"
Loving Mr. Good Boy
"Bruv i love everything about this its a good read and i recommend this to anyone looking for a new favourite The relationship that they shareee😫omgg its amazinggggg"
Wow!
"This book is 🔥🔥🔥"
Loving mr good boy
"The story is powerful; I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"
Good
"Good so far"
Kinda short but good
"The chapters are short but it's a fun book. "
How much I liked the book
"I did not see anything that didnt like I love everything about this book and hope everyone else finds a liking to it. And the particularty reason of my rating for this book is that because i liked everything about it, like the funny sienes, the plot , how organized it is, amd how the grammar is done . THIS BOOK IS FIRE🥰😍😘😘😍🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍💕💕💕💕💕💕💯💯💯"
💚💚💚
"Get crazy over the book so sad is just 10 chapters 😔. My BFF is gonna love this book"
Loving Mr Good Boy
"Overall it was good. I did see some grammatical errors that can easily be corrected. The writing style is not something I would normally read but I would like to see more."
Decent Work
"Nicely plotted, connecting but need certain improvisation in the conversation of the characters. Overall, nice work."
Good
"I really liked the fact that you have reversed the gender roles in the cliché bad-boy trop. However, there were certain style and punctuation errors that were apparent in the story. Yet, I do believe you have potential and I'd like to see more of your work."
Loving Mr Good Boy
"The story started off good with an exciting plot but now I feel like it’s getting boring and a bit dragged out with nothing really happening..is it going to be a love story or not?"
Still not getting where this would take me.
"First of all, I am having a hard time liking the main character. Yes, she was a bad girl. Yes, she had issues. But I feel that it was just too much that I haven't found a single thing I like from her except for the fact that she called her car 'my baby'. Maybe you can write more details about her past and her feelings except hate (towards school) and lust. I really wish she was more likeable. Like, what was her positive trait? She was just all about having fun I didn't even know if she truly loved her friends. I waited until the very recent chapter to connect with her. But seriously, she suddenly being an illegal fighter made it even weird without any explanation. How come a high school girl without any athletic figure and training could be so good at fighting? Again, details! About her friends, it was hard to memorize who was who. I feel that the characterization of each person wasn't strong enough. You described them at first, but readers need to be able to see it from their actions too. I found some grammar mistakes, but you can fix it by re-reading your story before posting it. If it's not enough,consider having a beta reader. One thing for sure, you wrote several sentences in present tense, while your story in general is in past tense. You need to fix that. I also noticed that you wrote 'spinned' as the past tense of 'spin'. It should be 'spun'. Anyway, maybe this story might just now t my cup of tea, but I hope this review helps you. Keep up the work! Regards, Kei Angelus"
