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Good thriller book

"It's a really nice triller book! Loved it alot"

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Surprisingly Good

"The author holds the suspense till the end. Didn't have much expectation when started reading it but was surprised at the end. She has a great command over the story line. It was very well written"

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Perfect thriller!

"The story line is awesome and i should accept that it is the exact story that could please me! Those two secrets... my god... i was dying to read her other books! The author maintained suspence till the end and i was so happy! I dont think she make grammatical errors! Writing style is awesome!"

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Beautiful start

"Congrats ! The story was overall awesome...keep on going with your colourful ideas...The way you tell that “ Don't judge the person by appreance" and the gossip of people were really great....I enjoyed your story...keep on rocking buddy"

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Interesting Read

"As a writer who writes suspense for a living, you've done a great job conveying it throughout the story. I thought for how small the story was, the character were well-placed. I loved the character, Finn, who is an archaeologist that is blamed. What I felt it lacked was descriptions, though this is me personally. I thought the writing style of this story was unique and the premise of the story was fascinating. It remembered me of a classic 'who-dun-it' which I loved. Apart from the lack of descriptions, I felt that the grammar could use some work as well. Though, I do have to say, I did enjoy reading this tale and hope to read more of this author's work in the future. If you like classic mysteries, this story may very well be for you. -Myria Candies (Author of Black Hollow)"

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Neat Read

"This is a good read for those wanting a good one shot thriller."

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Good Story

"The plot is good but the writing style needs a little bit of improvement as it got a bit confusing in the middle. "

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Good plot line!

"An interesting idea and plot line, would be a great longer story if the characters could be fleshed out more. Worth a read!"

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The story is easy to understand and it is cool to read by the way it is curious

"I love the story begins and the author gives some messages about gossip people's in mid of the story and that's the fact💯 know one cannot read others mind beautifully that's nature!! The author wrote the story with beautiful environment which is filled with emotions and thoughts. And the characters in this story is awesome talking about 'Finn' he is a silent man with "mysterious room", 'james and jill' stand with finn in confused mind but atlast they regret to finn and talking about "the secret seven"and their investigation is creative🙊💕 looking forward more creative story like this...❤️"

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Good start

"The concept itself is great; However, lots of grammatical errors plague the story, and it reduces enjoyment. Many parts are worded confusingly, which leaves me questioning what I needed to grasp from said parts. I enjoyed the story overall, as it's a fairly interesting one, but I believe it still needs lots of work before being highly successful."

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An Ah-mazing read!

"I like a lot of things about this story. Even in one chapter, the author managed to convey a lot of emotions and thoughts. I like the blurb, the plot, the cover, the buildup, the suspense factor and the author's writing style too. But what I like the most is the way it has been written and presented. Word play is nice too and I never felt bored even for a second. The fact that author has managed to maintain suspense throughout the story also makes it an intriguing read. What's more is it makes the reader think about their own lives and reflect upon it. The reader can feel the things happening in this story: like how we are misjudged or how me misjudge, our relationship with others and our portrayal of ourselves. So I have to say, the author has done an amazing job of capturing many emotions. The only thing I felt off was about the grammatical errors. They were nothing major and nothing that disturb the reading experience, but they can be corrected. It would make the story even better. It was a great read indeed!"

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