What is your opinion?
Great Story
"I like this story; I love universal books, and this is a splendid story... Let's start with the plot - I like the plot, although there could be an improvement on the plot, by saying, rather show than tell, but I know in time you will understand what I mean... Character development-you have good, powerful characters, but I'm just wondering about their development... but I'm sure as the book continues there will be lines where they are introduced to us, and developed... The story is well planned, and I give it a thumbs up, I love books like this, it does toy with one's imagination and I hope this book continues... I pretty much said everything in the comments, so I hope this review is better than the one before... Writing style-your writing is style is nice, but I suggest using stronger words, I know English is not your first language and I also know you are trying your best, and I respect you for that. but dictionaries do help well sweetie... so does Grammarly and ProWritingAid... 🤗 and here is the upgraded review lols, I feel much better to write a better one... I don't write reviews just to say 'good job, this is nice' nope, because a review is something which helps the author and I hope I see the improvement when I read the book once again. superb job in this book, it's excellent."
A new world
"I will review again when i read it fully...🙂🙂"
Great
"Great story so far can't wait to see what happens next great job."
Amazing!!!
"Can't believe it's your first work... Great story... Amazing plot. That was carried out perfectly... hopefully the next one will be way more jam-packed. Only a little bit more attention is required in the Grammer section.but overall an amazing first try. P.s keep em coming 😁"
I like the concept, can’t wait to finish it.
"Gooodjobb!!!! KEEP IT UP🤩"
A simple review
"Great writing keep it up "
A New World
"I really liked this book...This is amazing...The plot was also good and the description of the scenes as well..Can't wait to read another book by this author😍😍👍.."
Really enjoying it
"I really need to know more .. wasn't sure at the start but I really like it so far "
Unique idea...
"The plot is the first thing that caught my eye, Its a quite interesting, amazing and intense. I love it and it got me hooked. So far, ignoring some grammatical errors, it is a great read. I would recommend to all .Don't think.Just read it guys!. It's a great read and you won't regret it.. Update soon. I can't wait for the next update....😀😀😀😊"
