Inkitt
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l honestly love this story it's so good love it❤️❤️❤️l really enjoy reading it is good hope u read it cause u won't regrets it its nice

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Very good

"I love the excitement and anticipation they have for each other My sister Because the book was literally out of the box"

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Good work 👍

"Good story."

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Good so far

"Keeps the reader interested ."

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Um hello !

"The only complaint is that you left us on a cliffhanger ! SAD FACE . I WANT MORE ! GIMMEEEE MORE PLS AND THANK YOU "

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Interesting!!!

"The story and the plot is absolutely good and refreshing. Really can't wait to read more. For a person who is new here, you are really talented. Although I did notice some punctuation and grammar mistakes silghtly, like you missed a comma her and there.... nothing that wasn't readable...overall impressive work..😊💯"

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Intriguing plot!

"As you mentioned earlier, there are some issues relating to punctuation and grammar. This is to be expected with any draft though. I love the attention to detail with each of the characters, A story is only as good as it's characters after all. I think that Tina is my favourite if I had to choose. There's also the car choice, I mean who doesn't love an Impala. I look forward to reading the rest of the story when it is finished."

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Genuin

"J'ai adoré cette histoire L'intrigue est parfaite Il y'a assez de détails Histoire est parfaite mais malheureusement inachevé Pleasse on attend la suite"

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Nerd

"Interesting"

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Nerd

"Interesting"

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