What is your opinion?
Great start!
"I have read through Chapter 2, and I think it's a great start. The narrator is written in a very relatable way. In the first two chapters, there has been some slight escalation, but I'm looking forward to some kind of conflict or growth. This might be tricky with only one real character. There has been some hinting about the employee at the sex shop, so I'm hoping that goes somewhere. Or, if you want to continue with the themes of the nosy gossipy neighbors, I think that is ripe for plot development also. Peeping teen neighbor boy? Mail-order dildo delivered to the wrong house? Spilled purse in a store? Package delivery person? I'm excited to see where it goes!"
A refreshing perspective!
"(Ongoing, read til the end of chapter 2) I've read a few diary-type stories but they're usually from a kid's perspective - so this was definitely a new angle! It felt really real; the wandering ramblings and go-with-the-flow thought process made this seem like a real diary of a woman who's been bored for so long and is now finally getting to experience things how she wants. The freedom and relief comes across very strongly in the way she doesn't hold back with the details; it's refreshing to read, and I also really enjoyed the humourous tone it takes at times too. Tis only two chapters in, but I'm looking forward to reading more. Great job! :)"
Great Work!
"Your book is quite interesting. It's like I'm reading the author's life experiences. Honestly, I am quite fond of writing diary during my childhood. That's why I am interested to your story. Moreover, I like your writing skills. It helped me to understand easily every details of the story. So keep the good work!"
Diary of a Loving Housewife
"Diary is short in length (so far) but it packs a heck of a lot in such a short story. I'm all for kinks and festishes and this doesn't disappoint. It goes for the gusto early on, describing the acts in full and complete detail and doesn't hold anything back. The writer and the narrator feel one in the same, conveying the words and thoughts and feelings all into and keeps me wanting more and more. I am excited to see where this goes, what the narrator shares going further and if her collection of toys get any more wild. "
Very good
"I liked it from the first paragraph the plot was great and the story line as well, it would have been even better if she had sex with the Eagle scout, but all in all it was a very good story"
