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Funny af

"I already love the OC, way more personality than the original Bella😂 It's funny af and I'm already waiting for the next chapter"

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The Twilight Hater

"This story is hilarious. I’m looking forward to reading more! "

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LOVE IT!!!!

"This story is so interesting and keeps me wanting to read more!!! "

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Best Fanfic Ever

"This was a great book! Even though it was a fanfiction. I don't usually read fanfiction but this was the best time I did it. You did a great job writing this fanfiction LadyRavenJade! I salute you! I look forward to seeing more of this book! It was, overall, really a generally funny book."

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Funny as hell

"Love it😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🎉🎉🎉"

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Good

"Good story and well written"

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Great book! It’s amazing

"Great book I love it!! Keep it up. I can’t wait to read more overall I’m really interested. It’s a great plot I love how it’s not cliche at all it’s different I love how the main character isn’t like Bella at all (besides the blood thing( lol!!!"

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amazinggg <3

"dear writer, this is by far the BEST twilight "parody" in like ever !! i love eveything about it but it bothers me a bit that you take so many words from the actual book, i understand that it relates to the book but i believe that this story should be a bit more unexpected because of bells unique emo/gothic/hipster character (sorry i dont know how to call her peronality ! ) besids from that i wont bother you with anything else because i think you should write how you think goes best with bells and im sure all of your readers will love and respect your choices for the book !! i will keep reading this like its a new episode of friends! i hope writing this makes you happy! <3 keep it up!! :D -love, Ellie :) p.s i love how everyone practically ignores bells death threats it makes me laugh every time :D"

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Idk

"=rr=rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻🌻sweet trap@xshi_ng:📍Name / Monster Throne Chise Ogawa. #Un solo capítulo disponible.Ahora mismovenir Basic Academy of International StudiesaestheticSunflower hip tattoos women"

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A novel take.

"This is definitely my favourite parody of twilight so far....I love the idea that you can totally mess with the vampires in the story just by being a far more diverse and interesting character than the original Bella! Your sense of humour is wicked, right up my street tbh. I hope that you continue to find exciting and hysterically funny new ways of tormenting Edward! Can't wait for the next instalments! Only faults I found in this book are the spelling and grammar mistakes, but I autocorrect in my head so it doesn't really matter to me....I know others can become totally anal about it though. Good luck in your writing career! "

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"I liked the rant, thought it was funny. This seems like such an original idea for a story, very meta. I wonder how much of the story you will follow or will you do original scenes"

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