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What is your opinion?
First!!
"My apologies, been reading this and thought I left my review. Too many books lol. Going back to the review, I got to say that first, I learn a lot from you. this is a an amazing book, your writing, grammar everything is awesome. love the beginning of how you take the imagination to a different place and your fantasy is amazing. the way you express the story is amazing. It has a bit of everything and I'm still reading it. Good things take time to enjoy! Well done!"
Fairytale with a twist
"An interesting twist of a popular fairytale. The timeline, though, is a bit confusing, as is how the protagonists travel from one universe to another using the carpet. Character depth and motivation could also use a little bit more work. Keep up the good work!"
