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Our secret melody

"A cute story, a typical famous-kind of a guy falling into a commoner girl, it's actually becoming reality in a few artist, but yes your story makes sense, in the world of fame your mental health is very important, thank you of sharing a beautiful narrative.👍🙌"

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Our Secret Melody

"I was looking for the drama and this delivered! You will enjoy the plot build up as you read the characters develop through their individual struggles.The pain they endure to reach happiness will inspire you to appreciate the choices we make and the growth we all go through. And although not every character will get their happy end (which I personally enjoy), the twist ending will leave you in tears and reminded you that life may be messy but it always worth it! Love comes and grows in unexpected way. "

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Our secret melody

"Best book I’ve read in a while! Loved it😍"

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Awesome story

"I can't say enough about this story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. The plot kept me interested throughout and the characters were great."

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I simple love it.

"I simple love it. It's not perfect but i love how you tried to settle all the issues (ex. sang apologizing to melrose & kai's relationship to his dad). you are amazing. please continue to write as long as you want. we're here to support you. And i guess, it's safe to say that you're an ARMY too, the butterfly, the purple color and lastly Jin. LOL if my guess was right, then we stan the same idols. 💜 have a great days ahead."

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Our Secret Melody

"I'm not a K-pop fan so I was a little relucant to read it as I didn't think it would be my cup of tea. After reading a couple of chapter the story did not disappoint, I got sucked into the storyline!! I was in tears at a certain point and it was written so well (especially the part that fooled most readers) and again I would come back to read this book in the future"

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For the love of KPop

"It’s been a long time since I got to be this attached. I love the story. No doubt. I was totally into it. Good character development, although in some parts — spelling, puncs, grammar, and the like, needs improvement. Maybe, you’ll be able to revise some, if not all, next time if not in the near future for I know that you’re busy writing more stories and that’s totally okay. On the other hand, the story isn’t dark, you just have to have an open mind about some topics discussed or whatnot. Other than that, I recommend the story and I’m excited to read more from the same author. 🤗"

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Storyis very well

"I like the story' and IT's great story',for reader's is recommendation "

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K-pop drama romance

"I never cried reading a book before, but this novel was a master piece! It spokes volumes on how deep the human mind could take you. I personally love kpop, and this story pretty much explains how toxic the community is and how idols are treated. I adored all the charaters, no one was perfect, and you could relate to alot to their struggles. I love Kai and Rose together, but i still favor jin. Thank you for writing this heart touching story, i'll be buying the book on kindle forsure :)"

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Our secret melody

"That was really a very wonderful story, I felt a lot of emotions through the journey of reading it, absolutely a five stars story. Thanks a lot dear author for sharing your work, don’t stop writing cause you are amazing, can’t wait to read more of your stories. "

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srgFF

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Our secret melody

"I loved reading it. I am happy to see the happy ending. 😃😃"

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Hermosa

"Quede completamente prendada con la historia, esta tan llena de emociones que describen a muchos de nosotros en nuestra vida y emociones . Sigue asi."

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Underrated plzz read it once

"The story is pretty good I don't know why this story have so little likes I liked it so far and writer is doing justice with the characters everything is awesome👍👍"

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😍😍😍

"Great plot! 👏 but kinda complicated on the characters."

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Our Secret Melody

"I actually started reading this because T.M posted on my wall but the more I read the more I was entranced by the book. The plot is strong and is put into motion just in time to continue to capture the reader’s attention. I like how a few characters are already introduced in the first chapter. Overall it’s a great story and it also helped that I am a K-Pop fan, I loved it. 🥰"

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Our Secret Melody

"I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this book and ended up reading more than I planned to! I believe that you're a K-pop fan yourself, which has made it easier for you to switch with the personalities of your characters, especially MelRose's sister's obsession with the group! I love how you've brought out the theme of family, here and there, because I think in most stories it isn't brought out enough. MelRose's family, including their dialogues and their lifestyles, were realistic and I think that was also a major reason why I was hooked over this beautiful story! If there's anything I believe you have to improve, I think it's your dialogues. I did mention that they seemed realistic, but that's when considering the kind of content you put into their discussions; not the way you presented it. Perhaps your first language isn't English so when planning the dialogues in your head, there could be places where without you knowing, things get a little chunky. But I believe, the more stories you read and the more stories you write, you'll be able to improve it and slay in your writing with your eyes closed!!! Much love and wishing you all the best!!!"

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🙂🙂🙂amazing!!!

"Nice work and very interesting story. "

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Kpop

"I liked the plot of the story and disliked nothing but the fact that jin and kai are going to argue over the same girl"

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This story is extraordinarily written.😍👍🏽💕

"It’s so emotional and unpredictable. It’s keeps me wanting more... can’t stop reading, I just so love this book."

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