What is your opinion?
Brilliant concept
"I loved the concept of this story. Writing from a cat’s perspective really grabbed my attention. But I think the story could use some editing here and there. I think the story could be brought to a whole other level if you cut down on the details in some places such as the description of the attic. I didn’t find it necessary and it took a bit of the focus away from the underlying mystery and eerie undertone. I think it also would give more power to it. Other than that a splendid story that just needs a little bit of tweaking!"
Need Some Editing
"Reading your two stories, it seems that you like writing about death and tragedy. For this one, being told from the point of view of a cat, I found it interesting. Although, to make it clear, so the cat's name was also Billie? I got confused at first, but I am not sure if it was because I'm not used to reading poetic style or there are some confusing sentences. I found some grammar and punctuation mistakes and I did leave some feedback. I hope you've received them. (In case you didn't, I asked about some possible typos and corrected the punctuation.) Also, I noticed the present tenses changed into past. Did you do it deliberately? Because I though the story was linear, no flashbacks. Well, anyway, keep writing! Regards, Kei Angelus"
