What is your opinion?
Nice story
"I enjoyed the story but the novel needs some serious proof reading, there’s so many grammar mistakes and lack of punctuation that I often wanted to drop the book! I’m glad I didn’t as it’s a nice read, maybe needed a stronger ending though! "
The Determined Mr. Delicious
"At first I thought this went a little too fast into the story, but I was riveted by what Giovanni and his brothers were going to do next! I really enjoyed the fast pace, clever banter and sexy scenes. I am definitely reading the next installment. Thank you for the entertaining read!"
Amazing. Period
"I literally do need to say anything. All you need to know is to read this book because it’s that good."
Great book
"Enjoyed relaxing and reading. The only thing that threw me was the ending. The reason I say this is that it say the book is complete??? If the way you have ended it is as what you want ok but to me it’s not finished. Anyway loved it book and hope to read more of your books and will be happy however you end them."
The Determined Mr. Delicious
"Excellent book! I enjoyed the storyline. I wasn't able to stop reading until I got to the end. Great job!"
The Determined Mr Delicious
"I kept expecting something bad and was delighted it never happened! A thoroughly enjoyable story with some unexpected laughs. Well written and edited, can’t wait for the wedding!"
The determined mr delicious
"Beautiful story and good writing "
The Determined Mr. Delicious
"This was a very good story 🥰🥰💗💗"
determined mr.delicios
"oh more story like this more love no violence "
The determine Mr. Delicious
"Beautiful ☺️ 😊😊😊😊"
Mr. Delicious and He s Princess
"Wow I'm loving this book so much. Worth to read every page. Almost done with then I'm starting the 2nd book. Thank you so much ❤❤❤"
The determined Mr. Delicious
"Wonderful story loved it"
Gi and
"I love this story im hooked"
Beautiful story
"I love this story makes me want to fall in love "
I LOVED it!!!!!!
"I love the plot of the story. The characters are well thorough. The writing style could be improved because it is kind of hard to tell who is talking in the chapters. There weren't many grammar issues. The book is overall a very good read and I would definitely recommend this book to people."
Good
"So sweet and humorous story 🥰"
The determined mr delicious
"The story is cute. The dialogue just seems a little young for the age of the main characters. The storyline at times feels a little rushed. But it still is a good book and it still held my attention to the end. I plan to read the second book. Even with the parts that I felt the story needed improvement I still recommend the book to readers. "
Mr. Delicious
"This is a good story... But it's written almost like a screenplay. SOoo many details... That are not very interesting. .. repetitive dialog from multiple pov. Really not a bad story, but not an easy read. "
The Determined Mr. Delicious
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The Determined Mr. Delicious
"The story was interesting enough while they were on vacation. Got very slow and boring once they separated and came home. If you weren't going to write any further about after they got home, then why not just stop the story after the vacation? I was waiting for more....more about the carnival, more about meeting each others families, more about saying I love you and which of them was going to move where to be together. The individual I'm home phone calls were boring. No one gets so sick, especially vomiting and fever, from being out in the rain the day before. And who wants to read about that? If it led elsewhere to further the book, OK, I can deal. But to just stop the book a week after getting home. I felt cheated."
