What is your opinion?
Great Idea
"The over all idea of this was wonderful, and drew me in. Now I'm over here thinking about how Dudley Dursley could have had a magical child, which would be a really interesting area. However, in some of the parts, grammar was a little off; it didn't take away too much, just something I noticed. For example, when ending a quote, it would usually be something like, "Hi," rather than simply "Hi". But the characters, especially Dudley, were very on point. Though I do feel like Ginny would be a tad bit insulting to Harry, haha. But it was still a very good fic. I enjoyed it."
Enjoyable
"Short, sweet and fun to read. I like the idea behind it. That is what caught my attention; the idea behind it. It is a little rough in the writing but I could see it become amazing with a little bit more details. I do like it though, it just feels like a first draft. I believe that good stories really do need about 3 re-writings, or awesome beta readers."
