What is your opinion?
Interesting Plot.
"This is a really interesting plot and your story makes great sense. One thing I really like is it keeps the reader hooked. I couldn't stop reading and your amazing grammar was on point. It just brought more fun to the reading. Great work."
Great
"I really loved your story. It was unique and the plot was brilliant. Good job. However, I would have preferred a little less backstory in the first chapter. Also I found some technical errors which can be corrected when editng. Overall, I really liked this and I would love to read more of your work."
Buckle up, Buttercup!
" This review is for the first chapter only. What can young, genius Oliver do when his mother insists he get a job? And not just any old job ..but as a janitor at the local Haunted High-school! (Some mother. You’d think with Oliver’s grades, she’d push for him to be a scientist or something.) Only younger sister Sophie seems to properly understand the dangers of the new high school but is helpless to save her brother. Quite sad really. Grammar was good though I did notice one paragraph was duplicated in the very next paragraph. Overall a delightful read and humorous look at what can happen when the warning signs are ignored because the ones giving the advice are supposedly too ignorant. Beware the monsters! "
