What is your opinion?
Great read!
"I read the first chapter (aka - prologue) and I loved it because: ~ Great premise - the book advertised itself well and it was a great start! ~ The cliffhanger - please update! I need to know what happens next! Concerns: ~ Slight grammar errors - nothing a good word processor can't fix ~ Paragraph length - when in doubt, remember tiptop (change the paragraph when the TIme, Place, TOpic or Person changes) - and make sure that the paragraphs are defined (i.e. they have a gap between them) I'll withhold my judgment about whether to recommend it to prospective readers until the next update arrives, but if you have to ask me - go ahead :D"
Great Cliff Hanger!
"My best friend from school has an Inkitt account named Kitty Master, and she told me about this book. I read it and I really wanted to know what the next part is about. The cliff hanger is a good choice for a story like this. Keep up the thrilling work!"
OMG! What happened?
"I read this and I was like "OMG? What just happened to my brain?" Because I was going through the recent books on the Inkitt homepage and I saw the summary and I was reading the whole thing by 2 seconds after. Soo thrilling. The tag of thriller is right. This is a really good thriller book. Good cliff hanger!"
Amazing
"This story was really breathtaking and I would definitely want to read more. However, there were many technical errors which could be fixed during editing."
Such a Thriller!
"I read the first chapter and I am so thrilled about the next chapter. But, "towards the kitchen" should be "toward the kitchen" but the end is a really good cliff hanger. I'm thinking "What will happen next?" And I will not be a spoiler so I can't review the other questions. Good book, though! I can't wait the read more!"
