What is your opinion?
Fantasitc read
"Very well written. A must for wizarding fans. I am looking forward to the next chapter:!"
Interesting
"As far I have read this book till now I find the story really interesting and characters description was good but still it could have been more good😊. The plot was quite interesting and yes there were some grammatical errors but it could be fixed if author edit the book again. Besides the overall story was amazing and I wish the author best of luck and keep writing ❤."
So Far So Good
"So far the story plot is going very well! Though I have noticed so grammar and punctuation errors. Other than that, the story has great potential! Good work!"
Could use improvement, but worth the read
"So far, the characters are interesting and so is Realms Night, but there are some things that could be improved. The plot isn't quite moving forward yet, so I can't exactly say whether it's good or bad. However, I do feel it's a little rushed. It seems like there was hardly any struggle with Adriana going with the mystery man. I'm not saying go write four pages of filler content on the characters brushing their teeth--you just need to find that nice in-between spot. I might write a new review as you write more. But I do like what you have so far, it's intriguing. I love your writing style, mostly the way you describe things. It's a major book turn-off for me when I see blocks and blocks of text describing a character we've barely met, but you keep it short paced yet still informative. We have a basic sense of who the characters are without wanting to turn away from the story because of how long the writer spent with background info. You punctuation and grammar could use a little work, but don't worry too much or take that personally. I don't think there's a single story out there that doesn't need at least a little editing. The main thing I realized was that you'd have several characters talk in the same paragraph, which could make it confusing until you'd read who said what. I haven't noticed that many spelling errors, so props to you for that! I hope this review didn't come off as rude to you. I think this story is very intriguing and has a lot of potential in it once it starts moving. I'm excited to see what will happen next."
