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Greeting And Appreciation Request!!

"Hi, I’m Aliana a professional comic, webtoon, and manga artist with a passion for cinematic storytelling. Your story has the perfect balance of emotion and intrigue that deserves to be visually brought to life. I specialize in expressive, high quality art that captures character depth and dynamic world building. Let’s turn your story into a stunning visual experience connect with me on Discord: Aliana_Jordan."

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Just Don't Say Love

"Gripping tale keeps you on the edge of your seat🌹"

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Just don't say love

"On my way to read the second part!!! Amazing!"

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It's good looking forward to the next one

"Its a good read fun entertaining "

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Great

"Loved the plot, very realistic in some areas, the emotions, a lot of mafia books skip real emotions, can’t wait to read more"

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Lovely read

"Truly lovely book"

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Suspense is killing me!

"This book is awesome! A little bit of everything- love the suspense! "

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Just dont say love

"Pleasse make a second book"

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Just don’t say Love

"Very well written book "

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Just don’t say love

"Great story"

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Mrs

"Love the action, it's fast, the narrative between characters pacey & credible. Only a few spelling errors i.e ending in oar instead of ore'. I'll be empty when this is finished so will need to find more from this author. Thank you. "

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Obsession

"Interesting story"

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Love it😍

"Awesome book forpeople who love the Mafia. Kudos to the author.😘"

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Oh my

"I can’t believe he is alive i hope there is a part two"

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Just Don't Say Love

"Great story I loved it can't wait to read the second part💜"

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Amazing 😁

"Thrilling to say the least 👍👍 every reader who loves Mafia related content needs this book in thier library 💯💯💯💯"

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Hooked

"This story hooked me in right away! I love the family dynamic between the three and Neil is absolutely amazing. The story is beautifully written with the perfect amount of detail. Looking forward to the next one!"

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5/5 would read again

"I really enjoyed this story and the author's writing style. The author exemplifies "show, don't tell," especially when it comes to displaying the characters' emotions. The scene in one of the earlier chapters where Loreina was crying and throwing bottles in the shower stuck with me. Sometimes, it was tough to tell who was speaking in the dialogue, but other than that, the punctuation/grammar is strong. I highly recommend Just Don't Say Love! It's one of the best books I've read on Inkitt."

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Action packed and Amazing

"This story is one you have to read for yourself. I will not give any spiolers... but the author didcan amazing job.. 😘😍"

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Mob After My Heart

"Mafia stories, I feel, are always some of the hardest stories to write. There's so many emotions and positions that need to be thought out and written out, and this captures them! You join Lo and feel like it's your personal agenda happening. If you want a unique mob story and love going on a roller coaster, I'd recommend this one for sure!"

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