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Love it

"Okay, so maybe I’ve found another HP fan here? I really like this story, even if the way it’s written isn’t the way I write. (Please don’t change that, I’m just letting you know we have VERY different styles). I love it. Missing a few words, but nothing crucial, and I think it’s good. Awesome!"

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Fantastic!

"This story so far is just amazing! I can't find any faults. I love how you take the characters that already exist, and the plot that's already there, and include them but write your own story. Malfoy seems like a right git, but your main character seems to know that and is trying to avoid him when he can. I also love how you've got a character with the Slytherin traits ambition, cunning and all that, but he doesn't seem to care about peoples blood like other people. I hope he gets to spend some more time with Harry, Ron and Hermione later in the book. Keep up the stellar work! Sofia"

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Good job!

"Okay, let my start off by saying Harry Potter is not my thing at all, I watched the movies and didn't really like or pay much attention to them. It's just not my thing, but O.M.G. I think you did an amazing job with this book! There were a few things that I thought were confusing, but I think that's my lack of Harry Potter knowledge. A few grammar errors, but nothing that really took away too much from the story. All in all great book, would read again!"

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