What is your opinion?
Such a good story!
"I was only going to read about 15 chapters but I was so engaged and read the rest! It was so engaging, keep writing!!! 😊❤️❤️🥰😊❤️"
From Friends to Benefits to Maybe Lovers?
"I loved this story. Two grown, young-ish adults living their busy lives while still maintaining their friendship. All of a sudden, it changes. Without spoiling anything, I honestly hope for the best for them and their future. I hope their future together is positive. I thought this story was very well-detailed, albeit a little too much info. The technical side of it could use polishing up. I think just trimming the extra details would make this a little more reader-friendly. At the same time, it does seemed very well-researched. Good job on that department. Other than that, this is a great story and I hope everyone checks this out."
The Love You Choose
"Let's get the technical stuff out of the way first. Your skills are excellent and I have no complaints about grammar, etc. You've got great editing skills. Your Title is bang on and I like your cover. The blurb reeled me right in. So great marks for those too. You weave a complex portrait of two friends who don't even understand how deeply they love each other and how their families have given them exactly the right upbringing to make them great parents. Lynne's unexpected pregnancy might just be the push they need to make the leap to being in love. Keep writing. I want to know how this turns out. Will they admit that they don't need to be :;in love' to have the feelings that make for love that keeps them together for life? Please finish the story."
A great one here:)
"The flow of the story is really smooth. I loved how the writer has chosen to shed light on family relations and friendship. So far, it's a great story with a lot of unexpected plot twists. Keep up the good work:)"
Lynne & Huan
"This story is so addictive. I can't wait for Lynne and Haunted to finally get together."
SO GOOD!
"Wow! You're so great at building up settings and places and characters, that I could vividly see everything through my mind's eye. I was really taken aback, but the setting is very realistic and so enjoyable to read, along with it's very different and very unique characters! I love interracial romances, and I feel like many people don't portray them in books so it's so rare to find any! But this was perfect and I can't wait for you to finish writing it so I can keep reading! Much love, Coffee."
