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What is your opinion?
Interesting!
"Wow, interesting way to start. Love the choice of names, it's refreshing. Just small advice in punctuation. The first letter in dialogue capitalizes it. that would be all, hope to read more and keep up the good work."
Reincarnation
"I think the story is interesting. The idea to depict the story is also different. But there are lots of minor errors that an be rectify easily. I hope you will rectify them, and then this will a perfect. Good Luck. "
REINCARNATION:The story of us by Agnes
"The story is interesting and further tells the believe in Reincarnation. The plot construction is okay, and the choice of words by the author is wonderful"
