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Great!

"The story has some really good descriptions. The world-building and the mythology behind it are pretty great, too. The pace quick and providing as much info as necessary to keep it interesting. I really enjoyed this!"

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Suspenseful and action packed!

"I love the intriguing opening of this story. I also love the action through which the entire story takes off like a cannon. Your writing style reminds me of mine in some places. I could feel and enjoy the interesting energy you bring thorough the narrative. You also have the sort of descriptive ability i admire. I have enjoyed reading it so far and i am sure the chapters to come have the potential to be more interesting than the ones i have read so far. You have an action packed and thrilling story here."

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