What is your opinion?
Needs improvement but is a nice story
"Potentially its an interesting and nice story. Advice would be separate dialogue, paragraphs structure try to make them of four or five lines each. Punctuation as well. Otherwise well done."
Very Enchanting!
"When I start reading this book, it's like I entered a fantasy world. It was an awesome experience. Your book should be on the rating chart of best fantasy books! I don't really read fantasy books and magical fiction stories. But, damn after reading your book. I actually want to read it. You've introduced me into this genre. And I'm very happy to be a part of it! Keep up the AMAZING WORK!"
Magic School
"This story is really interesting and I would like to see where it goes. But I suggest that you don't make each chapter on long paragraph because it will make it a bit boring to keep on reading it. Every time a character speaks try to make it a separate paragraph so that it's easier to read it and tell when someone is speaking. I would say that you're moving too fast with the story. The first chapter has a lot of information and the characters aren't introduced properly. Like in the first chapter you could start off with just the relationship and feelings in the family and then end it with explaining about her magic powers, and then in the second chapter, you could talk about the school. But I think it has a really good plot. So keep it up."
Magical ✨
"It was a good story and I liked the characters too.. But some parts of it was a bit confusing to me.. My personal opinion is that this story can be a perfect one if the grammar mistakes will be corrected and also if it will have a proper ending.. And I am waiting for it because it is a very imaginative story..Also I wish the author good luck with that and do keep on writing ♥️"
