What is your opinion?
Riveting
"The detail is fantastic and creates a wonderful sense of environment and character. I became immersed in it as I continued. There was only some minor pronoun confusion here and there (he/she) but if you ask me that is just a typing error that happens in high-volume text. You can fix it anytime. Whether this stays a one-shot or a multi-chapter story, it is a compelling read."
Great First Chapter!
"Ne, this is a really good start to a wonderful chapter! It has a plot I've never been exposed to before and I'm definitely looking forward to more. The descriptions were so well-written they were very graphic and some words and paragraphs were very powerful. Itachi, being blind, able to describe Sakura in such a way proved how professional he really was. It was a realistic and interesting chapter, even on the first. I also loved Sakura's point of view-- the fact she was needed by the fallen man. The plot has no holes and has a lot of potential. I look forward to reading more! <3"
