What is your opinion?
Beautiful
"I really liked this. It was powerful and made you really think. It had a very surreal, elegant quality to it. Beings as I have no ability for poetry, I'm not sure what to say other than that. The writing style was very nice -- although I think that the first stanza was worded in a confusing way. I thought it was affecting, especially toward the end, and the progression felt very real and natural. As for the technical aspects of this writing, I honestly don't know how poetry is supposed to be punctuated, so I didn't see anything wrong with it. It was very good work. Thank you for posting it! I would definitely read more by this author."
Really hits home
"I really appreciate the lesson in this poem. In this day of having to get married three or four times in order to get it right, this really speaks to the beauty of lasting love that's not quite appreciated as it should be. Even though I'm not one for poetry (I'm one of those losers who needs everything to rhyme), the message in this is pure and it flows well. It has rhythem and structure and it's message is conveyed loud and clear. Very well done indeed!"
