What is your opinion?
I am totally in love with this book, I hope you make more chapter and as always thank you for the hard work and dedication . Love this piece of art
"I really loved this book but I think the part where the moosa killed maya’s brother was a bit too much but it actually adds a bit of spice the emotions of this story. The reason why I rated this book was because it has me completely hooked and as for all your hard work and dedication, thank you soo much for bringing this masterpiece piece and I truly am sorry if I offended or uncomfortable in this review or anything.Thank you🥰"
A good read
"The story description you've written is just... amazing. I really loved your description. It's so captivating and intriguing. And the prologue nearly took breath away. I felt like watching an extreme thriller movie in the first few chapters. I found some grammar errors, mostly regarding present and past tense but other than that, it's a good read! Keep it up!"
Hey is there’s part 2 I wish thou bc I don’t really understand the end of the story but ur story is pretty good keep going :)
"Keep going ur story is good but what makes me wondering is that I don’t really understand the end it’s not obvious this is my opinion otherwise keep writing I’m pretty sure ur good enough to write more interesting stuff thank u :)"
Review
"The story plot is good and the writting engages the reader to keep reading. But one thing, look after the indentation of the paragraphs and the grammar. Other than that, it's amazing!"
