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Hellfire

"It got me hooked right at the start, It's amazing how well the story is put together! Strong female characters always have a place in my heart."

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I Loved This!

"Well done. This was an incredibly good story. I loved the plot twists and the characters are very well defined. There is much detail, but not overwhelming, which I find refreshing as sometimes authors tend to over use descriptions, creating headaches for the reader, but your story is one not of simplicity, but of great imagination and excellent dialogue. I have nothing major to critique other than you have done an amazing job on this story. Loved it!"

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Hellfire

"An epic tale, which we are thoroughly enjoying. The plot, characters, and dialogue intertwine in a way that carry the reader further and further into this supernatural world, believing every moment of it. We have one tiny comment on the frequent use of verbs such as said, explored, explained, commented, etc. About half of these can be left out, particularly if there are only two people talking. And even when three or more are talking, a gesture or action is often better than an adverb and verb to describe which character is speaking. But all in all, a beautifully written tale, and we look forward to what is coming next. Everyone should read these stories."

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Hellfire

"This book or series of books would make a great movie or TV show! It is so full of action and the description of hell is awesome...I can just imagine the CGI on the movie screen!! Can't wait for the next chapters to post! "

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Interesting

"I liked your book Brimstone a lot and was waiting for Hellfire, I am excited and ecstatic about its arrival. I appreciate and recommend your work."

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