Inkitt
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"Hi I loved this so much. I loved how you said English wasn't your first language but yet there weren't many grammatical errors. And I also loved the poems they were great! "

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"It's unusual to find poetry but when I see someone I read them. I like them because they're short and nicely written. I'm amazed they're good because you said English isn't your first language. But overall well done, hope to read more!"

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"I liked the story the poetry is trying to tell, the meaning, the symbolism in the poetry, and the title. You could expand in the summary or make the dedication it's own chapter in the beginning, I know it explains why you wrote it and the concept but you could explain who the people in these poems are a bit, too. I would recommend editing the first chapter, too, it's the only chapter I saw with glaring grammar issues. Keep up the good writing."

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