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Pride and promises

"Interesting story! I like the little suspense in the last two chapter it's refreshing after the drama. Its a good love story that one can only dreamed of. Way to go Author 😊, good job👍😘"

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A Fantastic Journey!

"From start to finish, this is an excellent drama. Everything from the character development to the setting, atmosphere, and descriptions is excellent. The storyline tore me apart and then restored me. The chapters are just the correct length (at least for me), and they all link to keep you interested the entire time. Because I am a sucker for happy ever after endings, and you have provided me with one, Ahhh! It's lovely! Thank you, my sweetest and most generous favorite author, for such a heartwarming story. I'm looking forward to your next masterpiece. XOXO!!"

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Pride and Promises

"So well written😁 a wonderful story ❤️🙏"

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Eva

"Pls don’t apologise for lengthy chapters. The longer the better😃"

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Pride and promises

"Exciting 😍😍😍 Pls update "

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My heart!!!

"This is do far one of the best stories I've ever read! Its in- f-ing-credible!!! 🥰🔥❤"

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Love this story!!

"I love the plot. I love the characters. Very engaging story!!"

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Its a really good book and gives me hope

"I really didit dislike anything , my friends and family , its a really great book and I love it."

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I loved this book!

"Completely addicted to this story! I love the ending :)"

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Mickey Minnie

"Easy to read Minimal grammar errors"

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Pride and promises

"Love this story all the way. Please don’t let us wait to long for the update "

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Too good

"Very cute and intresting story "

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Pride and promises

"Very beautiful story....I hope Eva's legs become correct... Waiting for the next update 😊😊"

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Pride and promises

"Great job! kept me interested and beautifully written. way to go writer. Would definitely recommend it."

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Seriously what just happened

"Evelyn has gone through so much and now this??? What the heck. I am beyond pissed for her and I would love to punch Adrian in the throat for his rude and unkind actions. This is not a twist I would’ve seen coming. Poor Evelyn! She starts to trust this man and it has come to this. I can not wait to see what’s to come. "

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Writing style

"It was great to read your work and i am thankful for writers like for providing me inspiration with my work . As a writer myself i understand the hard work and struggle put into making a story come alive to its readers .I hope you keep on writing this good and your writing style is the most impressive thing and has really helped with my own work as well .Thanks for your help and keep it up .I hope to read more from you"

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Romance

"A very cute and down to earth romatic story. It is not quite finished yet, but I can tell that the end is going to be epic. Good job! "

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UPDATEEEEEEE.....

"It is so gripping and interesting!!!🔥🤩 I just couldn't stop myself from binge reading it. Can't wait for Mickey-Minnie confession scene. I guess I more eager to know that than love proposal🙈😂 I really like how you established the side characters too... I felt each character was significant and they had a beautiful story too ❤️ PS : I would like to read more on Adrian-Eve childhood story... It is so damn cute🥺 Please update soon😭... You really left me at a high point."

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Refreshing

"I really enjoyed this story, I binged the first couple chapters and I would have gone more if my phone didn't die. I really loved the female lead. Everybody loves girl power nowadays. The writing style was excellent. Very romantic and refreshing."

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Pride

"I love strong female lead and this story has both male and female lead with strong character. Very romantic and well written!!! "

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