Prologue- Moving Away
Moving trucks cloud the area around our house.
Awakening the feelings of how badly do I want to go to my bed and sleep. How I would convince my parents not to move.
Its been a tough job of the ten times we have shifted I could never convince them.
They did not shift much till I was six year old. Just once maybe, so not a big deal but as I grew up they kept shifting every other year.
My dad's the head journalist in a popular newspaper and instead of asking the people under him to move around and get some news, he tends to do that himself. The reason of which, I can never understand.
It was the first sometimes but now I am used it.
But what I don't like about moving is the spooky houses we live in.
Dad loves to investigate about these houses and their backstory and it does earns him a nice sum of money but because of this he always moves to some spooky place with weird people.
I wish I didn't have to go there.
Well the new spooky place here i come.
But I didn't know this time would be so different.
You do a good job concisely communicating your story's premise. My only nitpicks are about formatting: you often break for a new paragraph where you don't need to, sometimes just one sentence per paragraph, and it makes the pacing feel janky. Usually, you only break for a new paragraph when a new character speaks, when a new action is performed, or when a new train of thought begins. There are stylistic exceptions, of course, but this is a good rule of thumb. Other than that, just grammar and punctuation errors: I'd recommend trying out a program like grammarly, which will catch a lot of that for you with less hassle.
A dad like that and me will never get along id rather live in the streets than live with ghosts who knows what they can do
Interesting. Definitely need to polish the formatting and grammar. Also, how many moving trucks? When people move a lot, they usually (but not always) get rid of a lot of stuff so it's easier to move in the future.