What is your opinion?
Captivating
"I love the story so far. The character development, the plot everything is amazing. Good work!"
In the Shadows
"I am really captivated by the story this far. It's not just a romance but also a mystery. I cant wait to see this mystery unfold. Also I feel like it is not going to be the typical fall In love immediately situations that most books portray. There are a few spelling errors and some tense issues but this is easily fixed and they are not prevalent enough to deter me from continuing to read. Great start so far author"
In The Shadows
"This story is surely going to win the hearts of many! I'm sure about it! I love how the writer has used simple language with complex sentences, because in most stories I've read, the beginning is always a little confusing, but this is just perfect. However, one small thing I noticed is the fast flow at the beginning. I think it would've been better for the writer to maybe describe situations slowly than running from one scene to the other. Overall, I love the plot and hope this will become an exciting story once it's completed! All the best and keep up the good work!"
