A Night Out
Destiny Ray
A Night Out:
“Destiny, I hope you are ready,” Nicole said.
“I am. Where are we going? I am not sure if I’m wearing the right outfit,” said Destiny.
“Please, do not worry about it. Sammie and I have been planning this for a long time,” Nicole said.
“We are going to make sure you have the time of your life,” said Sammie.
Sammie asks me, “What am I wearing?” I tell her, “a little black dress that is backless and goes to mid-thigh and has lace on the trim.”
Nicole asks, “How are you wearing your hair and makeup?”
“Hair is down and light make-up,” I told her. My best girlfriends have made it their mission to help me live again. After so much tragedy, I was dead on the inside, only going through the motions of living.
The girls texted me that they are outside and asked me to join them. I lock up my apartment and go out to meet them. "Girl, you look amazing in that outfit," they say when they see me, and that is when I notice a white limousine.
“Hi, my name is Liam. I will be your driver for the night. He opens my door and helps me inside.
{Liam} informs me that “You can have any drink you want.” So I ask for an “Amaretto Sour.” My night has begun.
“Thanks, Liam, this is a perfect start to our night,” I tell him. Liam smiles, and I realize he is sweet. Liam noticed I seemed to be nervous, so he told jokes, and he was hilarious.
We get to a brick building with low lights and no sign with the club name on it. There was, however, a long line of people in front of it. I tried to use that as an excuse to go back home and watch movies. Sammie takes my hand, leads me to the side door, knocks, and a huge man answers, asking for the password.
Sammie gives him the password, and we are let in. Sammie leads us to an office where we meet a man named Dan, and we are given bracelets that carry different meanings.
{Dan} tells us not to lose or remove these bracelets, as they let the Doms know whether we are touchable.
{Destiny} I look at Sammie and Nicole and ask if they just brought me to a BDSM club.
{Dan} smiles and says, why yes, they did.
{Dan} You should go sit at the bar and observe. He walks me over and introduces me to the bartender, Eric.
{Destiny} Hi, I am Destiny. Nice to meet you.
{Eric} holds out his hand and says, I am Eric, and I will be taking care of you tonight. What can I get for you?
{Destiny} Amaretto Sour, please.
{Eric} smiles at me and says, coming right up.
{Destiny} So, Eric, I am curious: what is it like here?
{Eric} There is something for everyone if you like to control or be controlled.
{Eric} asks me, Which do you think you are?
{Destiny} I think I like to be controlled. I am so out of control with myself and need someone who can bind my pieces back together.
As I sit here talking to Eric, he watches the bar and notices a man nodding his head to get his attention.
{Eric} Excuse me, I have to serve the gentleman at the end of the bar.
Eric comes back with a fresh drink for me, telling me it is from the gentleman at the end of the bar.
I notice there's a note on the napkin, so I pick it up and read what he wrote. Hi, beautiful, my name is Leo, and I would love to take you to dinner at the rooftop restaurant. I would like to know what you think of this club and get to know you better.
{Destiny} Eric, can I get a pen? When he brings one to me, I flip the note over and write, " When and what rooftop?
Leo laughs, stands up, and comes to me.
{Leo} We have a restaurant on top of this building for people to talk without all the noise.
{Destiny} Okay, I am curious to see what you have to say, and it seems safe enough with all these people around.
{Leo} Please follow me then. Leo leads me to the elevator and gets us seated right away.
{Leo} So, tell me a little about you. Like, what is your name, and what brought you to the club tonight?
{Destiny} I tell him, "My name is Destiny, and my girlfriends brought me here to start living again."
{Leo} I see, so you have been closed off emotionally for some time now? Would you mind telling me what happened?
{Destiny} I would rather not have to say just yet. I hope you can understand that I just met you, and this is a story I only tell when it has to be. Not suitable for a club night.
{Destiny} Leo, tell me about yourself. How often do you come here?
{Leo} Well, I am a Dom, and I have a partner; we are best friends, and we are looking for a Sub that needs us as seriously as we need her.
{Leo} You look gorgeous. But miserable or tormented.
{Destiny} I smiled weakly and said, I am.
{Leo} Do you want to meet Jake and me for dinner when Jake comes back into town?
{Destiny} Yes, just let me know when. I would like to get to know Jake if he is half as charming as you are.
{Leo} Would you be willing to entertain the idea of two Doms in your life?
{Destiny} I would. I never thought I would, but that was before; now I try not to limit myself. If it takes two Doms to help me remember the lost me, then I will accept that.
{Leo} Excellent! I can not wait until Jake gets back; he is going to be so thrilled.









strong intro, told quite well with a sense of intrigue that invited the reader to follow this tale.
this reminds me of a story I read a while ago haha but it’s more fast paced (like that more because it keeps my attention)